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Ocean Vuong
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since 2008-03-29
Posts 37
NYC

0 posted 2008-03-30 01:15 PM



The old man sat by the bay.
He could not see the sky’s
smooth scarlet, amber glow,
nor streaks of violet
And so, he only listened.

The old man sat by the bay
as I came beside
the heap of shade.
O how he jerked, like a child
woken from fairy-dreams.

“Are you my son?”
His face wanes in the fog of Hope.
I bowed away and pinched my brow.
Across the bay a talon swept the cove
to pluck the time from a shuddering trout.

I faced the stranger and sung
“I am”
of which he flashed his ashen teeth
and said to me,
“I knew you’d come.”

And so we watched
the Sun completely sink,
till our souls lay hidden
in the blue of ink.

© Copyright 2008 Ocean Vinh Vuong - All Rights Reserved
Brian23
Member
since 2007-11-03
Posts 73
Belfast, Ireland
1 posted 2008-03-30 01:51 PM


Good poem. Enjoyed reading it
Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
2 posted 2008-03-30 03:37 PM


"to pluck the time from a shuddering trout."
very interesting poem.
                                Ida

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2008-03-30 04:54 PM


Enjoyed...James
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