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Lincoln
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since 2007-12-03
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Earth

0 posted 2008-03-30 03:08 AM


The search for happyness
Is easy to find
Try not to get cought up in this world
No object in this world do you own
Surrender yourself to nature
Nature is peaceful, nature is kind
And then my friend, happyness you will find

"When your deepest thoughts are broken, keep on dreaming boy, cause when you stop dreaming it's time to die." -Shannon Hoon

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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2008-03-30 06:56 AM


Like the thoughts...James
hiddensmiles
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since 2008-02-07
Posts 514
at the beach... i wish
2 posted 2008-03-31 12:07 PM


nice write!! but not all nature is kind (hurricanes)

JJ

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