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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2008-03-29 11:18 PM


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An old man
A frog jumps in—

Sound of water


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jwesley
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1 posted 2008-03-29 11:19 PM


Perfect!

j.

Robert E. Jordan
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2 posted 2008-03-29 11:24 PM


John,

Good luck on improving on Basho.

Bobby

Seoulair
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3 posted 2008-03-29 11:55 PM


Old man drinks

A frog jumps in—

Sound of water

secondhanddreampoet
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4 posted 2008-03-30 08:27 AM


An old frog
A fool falls in—

Sound of laughter.


[Sorry!]

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5 posted 2008-03-30 10:28 AM


the audacity!
Seoulair
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6 posted 2008-03-30 06:22 PM


Sound of laughter

An old frog
A fool, hot water

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