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Jeffry Dogma
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since 2008-03-24
Posts 13


0 posted 2008-03-28 06:33 PM



Temptation sneaks up
I grasp this brass AA coin.
The temptation fades
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We trade flirty stares
we both continue walking
another love gone
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The sun is my foe
the pool offers protection
I hide cool in him.
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The sun makes us hot
we look to the friendly pool
Now we are just cold
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White skin turns to brown
Oh how i befriend this sun
He makes me look good.
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Seoulair
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since 2008-03-27
Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea
1 posted 2008-03-28 07:16 PM


lovely Haiku. Enjoyed

If you don't light me
Let me not melt in your heat
I'm just a candle  

Decaflame
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since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635

2 posted 2008-03-28 11:09 PM


Jeffry

Welcome to Passions!

Your summer Haiku
are summer warm and we are
still waiting meltdown


EagleScorpion
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since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever
3 posted 2008-03-29 02:52 PM


a couple of these were really good

welcome

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