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Beacon |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida 
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I am hidden within the warmth of breath you take into your body. Shimmering with the vibration of your inhale. I am paused, mid heartbeat, by the beauty of your essence thirsting for the healing in your touch. I am swimming in the unshed tears of your empathy begging to slid down the soft of your skin. I am overcome with the light that is you washing me, spilling into my person. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
soft, romantic and beautiful. enjoyed the read. |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Susan This is soft, sensuous and simply beautiful. Alison |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
wow... just beautiful Susan... what wonderful words your heart has penned... love RDB |
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Brian23 Member
since 2007-11-03
Posts 73Belfast, Ireland |
An enjoyable read |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I am swimming in the unshed tears of your empathy begging to slid down the soft of your skin. lovely writing, Susan beautiful new picture, too  M |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I love beacon and eggs too....how are ya sweet Susie?....you're lookin' good!!! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Thank you so much everyone! Toe?  I am doing okay.  and you?"too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Wonderful poem, dear Susan! Very very captivating. I love the feelings it evokes. Love, Margherita |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Surely one end of a Rainbow must center on your house, my friend, for two beautiful things send it's essence from there...you and this beautiful write. j. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
A most beautiful and passionate write.... I thought it kind of stopped suddenly at the end, just didn't feel like ending lines. Other than that, IWIHWT.... PS: Love the new pic..... |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Susan, That was captivating... |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Thank you all. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love this side of you! so happy and fulfilled great new pic too |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Thank you Dixie. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
~sigh~Breathing this in, slowly... not wanting to exhale the feeling. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Grand-fine Romanticism (at its best!)... a supremely exceptional 'write!' [I only wish it had continued even longer!] very serious and long-sustained applause!! [a 'poetic standing ovation' for this most lovely 'penning!'] |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
sounds like a lovely dream that has touched down upon you. beautiful words here |
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