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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

0 posted 2008-03-28 08:11 AM

I close my eyes and feel your
presence embrace me as I
wear the warmth of your kiss
on my shoulders bare

You comfort me when I am low
delight my waking hours
stand firm when I am weak
on stones of solid hope

I touch you in my dreams
where words are smiles
And nothing can be heard
Except the mending of hearts

and I want to stay that way forever

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........
[This message has been edited by Roniece Dawson-Bruce (03-28-2008 09:02 AM).]

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2008-03-28 09:28 AM

Dear RDB,

There you go. This is a lovely poem. I like it loads.

Keep up the good work.

Bobby

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

2 posted 2008-03-28 11:12 AM

Nice poem Roniece,reminds me if we forget love we are in big trouble...

thanks

yann

simon
Member

since 2008-01-14

Posts 440
London, England

3 posted 2008-03-28 11:17 AM

I agree I think this is the lovliest of a string of lovliness from yourself...

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

4 posted 2008-03-28 12:42 PM

Nice write!!

Seoulair
Senior Member

since 2008-03-27

Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea

5 posted 2008-03-28 01:18 PM

lovely and romantic. Beautiful poem. love the way you ended it.

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

6 posted 2008-03-28 01:53 PM

Beautiful loving feelings expressed

Hope

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

7 posted 2008-03-28 01:55 PM

ms r&b, you seduce slowly and then savor the romantica....enjoyed you here

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

8 posted 2008-03-28 01:57 PM

Enjoyed, Roniece.
Ida

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2008-03-28 02:37 PM

As fine flowing silk...James

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

10 posted 2008-03-28 02:57 PM

What a romantic you are! I've never had a nicer poem written about me...thank you!

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

11 posted 2008-03-28 06:13 PM

nice

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

12 posted 2008-03-28 08:12 PM

thank you all so very much... your lovely comments have smiled my day... love RDB

...and Mr 'Deer... one should never assume! but I do like your style!

x

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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