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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2008-03-28 06:00 AM

you were burly girl in maybe then
with the wrinkle hair
and those eyes that made windows

it was part time easy to look away
at other places and want to
and just not say it without paper

and then there was some yesterday
with your hair down smooth and easy
like summer in soft water sighs

and I noticed your smile differently
and how you were woman shapes
that made the statue of me notice

the fragile of your abbreviation

______________

daark

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2008-03-28 06:09 AM

just beautiful Mr Daark... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

2 posted 2008-03-28 06:25 AM

and I noticed your smile differently
and how you were woman shapes
that made the statue of me notice

the fragile of your abbreviation

these lines moved me Mr Daark.. x

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2008-03-28 06:42 AM

ms r&b, thank you pretty one for the touch and for wearing my humble words on your smile

Indigo
Senior Member

since 2001-05-17

Posts 602

4 posted 2008-03-28 01:42 PM

she had always been
an art lover, but she lived
for punctuation.

D-
Your poetry is an exclamation point in my day...

Indigo

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

5 posted 2008-03-28 01:50 PM

Dark Stranger,

This has good symbolism. It's good to grow and notice things, isn't it?

Just Plain Bobby

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2008-03-28 01:56 PM

ms indi, you make me comma and consider..thanks babe.

_____________

bobby, thank you sir...I enjoy your reviews

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2008-03-28 03:04 PM

You never abbreviate the notice.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

8 posted 2008-03-28 04:37 PM

ms sun...you smile me babe!! Thanks

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

9 posted 2008-03-28 06:13 PM

enjoyed

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

10 posted 2008-03-28 06:21 PM

thanks vandana ms

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