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BugBuggy
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michigan

0 posted 2008-03-27 10:14 PM



walking along the shore
water softly splashing against the sand.
your hand holding my hand
leaves rustling in the trees
as the wind gently blows.
your arms wrapped around me
standing on the beach
savoring the beauty of the sunset
we are together looking at our Camelot
the place where we lived
the place where we loved
my mind once more has wandered
to you and our Camelot

BugBuggy

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Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
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1 posted 2008-03-27 11:21 PM


BugBuggy,

This is a very nice scene.  I like it loads.

Bobby

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2008-03-27 11:46 PM


nice view here

froggy
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since 2003-06-23
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Michigan
3 posted 2008-03-28 08:36 AM


wonderful read.
I can  picture the images in my mind.

:-)

Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things,
man will not himself find peace."

Albert Schweitzer,
Nobel Peace Prize Wi

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
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Sydney, Australia
4 posted 2008-03-28 08:40 AM


yes, agreed, this is very lovely!   RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

hiddensmiles
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since 2008-02-07
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at the beach... i wish
5 posted 2008-03-28 12:33 PM


very beautiful picture here. nicely done

JJ

Seoulair
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Seoul S.Korea
6 posted 2008-03-28 01:24 PM


beautiful and warmly touching.
JamesMichael
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7 posted 2008-03-28 02:26 PM


Waves of enjoyment here...James
BugBuggy
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michigan
8 posted 2008-03-28 07:43 PM


you are all much too kind in your words...Camelot is a lovely place I miss it very much and quite often my mind returns there..

BugBuggy

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