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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan

0 posted 2008-03-27 07:21 PM


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It is late
Almost the end

Of March
And snow
Is falling

Like old age
Remembering
Youth


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© Copyright 2008 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

1 posted 2008-03-27 07:24 PM


Impressive John!! You convey your thought with perfect execution.  

I very much enjoyed this, thank you for sharing.  

Now, to tuck this into my library.  

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
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So. El Monte, California
2 posted 2008-03-27 09:46 PM


enjoyed as always, John
                     Ida

BugBuggy
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since 2005-12-19
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michigan
3 posted 2008-03-27 10:05 PM


that was so simple and beautiful...

BugBuggy

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
4 posted 2008-03-27 11:40 PM


beautifully expressed
2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
5 posted 2008-03-28 11:41 AM


That's great..
  
  yann

gilead
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since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067
nevada, USA
6 posted 2008-03-28 12:16 PM


You have a wonderful gift for seeing the world. Your work is the distillation of Matthew Arnold's "sweetness and light".

Art

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