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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2008-03-27 05:56 AM



something about the meandering there
at an afternoon in windows
and coffee smell perfume too

tiptoeing around sometimes glances
and do you read my mind news
mid paper deep in a windy crowd

the small print confessions
darting in and out of moments
like an old man's day dream canoes

does the gata dance her shimmer
in recognition of soul's parhelions
when strangers are peaceful echos

with friendly trees blocking tomorrow
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daark


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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2008-03-27 06:00 AM


something about the meandering there
at an afternoon in windows
and coffee smell perfume too

tiptoeing around sometimes glances
and do you read my mind news
mid paper deep in a windy crowd


Enjoyed you here D, and the coffees smelling about ready right now so I gotta grab me a cup of java.  Want some?  
Name your flavor

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2008-03-27 06:05 AM


ms gs, thanks babe....bold and black works for me..
Margherita
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3 posted 2008-03-27 08:48 AM


quote:
does the gata dance her shimmer
in recognition of soul's parhelions
when strangers are peaceful echoes

with friendly trees blocking tomorrow



Awesome, dear D! Though it would surely be nice to see your eyes ... your mind, beautiful Poet, your mind is a wonder to contemplate and what a gift it is.



Love,
Margherita

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4 posted 2008-03-27 10:53 AM


tiptoeing around sometimes glances
and do you read my mind news

~*~

Something tells me that it's all
a foreign, but safe, language...

enjoyed this, as always...


Gentle Spirit
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5 posted 2008-03-27 02:38 PM


bold and black, good and stiff so it lasts for hours dont'cha think babe?  

Needed my second cup, it's always better the second time 'round....

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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6 posted 2008-03-27 06:33 PM


smiles and sighs Mr Daark... beautiful.. love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2008-03-27 09:22 PM


ms mar, thank you for the lovely reply special lady...you move me


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ms sun, you smile me with your love songs, thanks babe


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ms gs, thank you gentle one for the touch here


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ms r&b, thank you ms, you please me when you touch my thoughts

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8 posted 2008-03-29 01:42 AM


Afternoon windows and coffee - stuff to smile and reflect upon, D.  You do that to me.  I find myself just floating on your poetry and then read it again later to see how far it carried me.

A

Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2008-03-29 07:30 AM


ms ali-san...drifting you is a worthy blessing, thanks hon for the eyes
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