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Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
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Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

0 posted 2008-03-26 06:33 PM


The derelict,
whose name is Fred,
and Felix discuss at length
their lives.  

Why is Fred on the street,
and always alone?  

Why is Felix on the street,
and so seldom alone?  

They tell each other tales,
and never tell the truth,
because they don’t know
the exact answers
to those questions.  

If they did,
they wouldn’t tell.

Bobby

[This message has been edited by Robert E. Jordan (03-26-2008 08:51 PM).]

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Marchmadness
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1 posted 2008-03-26 10:28 PM


What happened to Fred? I knew a lady like fred, she was always on the street and always drinking. The kids called her Agnes, for some reason, but I heard her real name was Elenor and she had once been a teacher.
She got hit by a truck one night not too far from my house.
                                      Ida

Robert E. Jordan
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2 posted 2008-03-26 11:03 PM


Ida,

Fred is still in Felix's life.  You will be hearing more about Fred--soon.

Fred saved Felix's life, Fred is important to Felix.

Bobby

[This message has been edited by Robert E. Jordan (03-27-2008 12:03 AM).]

Seoulair
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since 2008-03-27
Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea
3 posted 2008-03-27 03:05 AM


This is a very good story!  I'll wait to read the rest.
Robert E. Jordan
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4 posted 2008-03-27 07:53 AM


Seoulair,

Thanks so much for reading.  I'm pleased you like the story.

I have engineered in Seoul several years ago.  I remember it as a lovely place, full of friendly, wonderful people.

It's great to see you here.

Bobby

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
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Sydney, Australia
5 posted 2008-03-28 06:30 AM


I'm happy Felix has Fred in his life Bobby... friends are very important.. love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
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Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
6 posted 2008-03-28 07:28 AM


Dear RDB,

Yes, Fred and Felix hit it off real well.  They kind of take care of each other.

Bobby

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