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Oklahoma Rose
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since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586
Oklahoma USA

0 posted 2008-03-25 08:53 PM



Good Night

Once again, the sun is going down
There were things I wanted to do
I went to work, just like always
Before I knew it, it was noon

I hurried to and from while trying
To get all of my work done
Then when I had the time I went outside
To catch some of the sun

I was too tired when I got home
I didn’t feel like doing anything
When I walked into the house
I could hear my little bird sing

My dogs and my cat were
Happy to see me
Other than that it is a very
Lonely place to be

Silence is all I ever hear
I wait for the clock to show
It’s time for me to call it a night
Then off to bed I go

Good night my dear friends
May God watch over each of you
Thank you all for being here
I will see you all again real soon

3-25-08




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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
1 posted 2008-03-25 08:57 PM


this is lovely! I wish you a good rest   love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
2 posted 2008-03-25 11:12 PM


I live alone too Rose. I'm just lucky to have my daughter and a few close friends close by. If you ever need someone to talk to I would be happy to have a new friend.
                                   Ida

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
3 posted 2008-03-26 06:17 PM


Dear Oklahoma Rose, you just touched my heart across the world with your poignant words.

It is 11 pm here in Italy and I am soon going to sleep too, not before sending a big hug to you and a caress to your cat and your dog, and a smile to your birds. You are a little community after all where there is warmth.

Love,
Margherita

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
4 posted 2008-03-26 10:36 PM


good night friend

it's always nice to talk with you and share your thoughts

Seoulair
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since 2008-03-27
Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea
5 posted 2008-03-27 03:00 AM


this is very touching. We indeed need good friends in life.
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
6 posted 2008-04-25 06:02 PM


I feel as though I am there with you ~ seeing, feeling, and experiencing a little piece of your world.

You know that I am always just a phone call away.

I know that you also find comfort in your faithful menagerie of companions to greet you each day.

Love to you, my dear friend,
Linda xo

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
7 posted 2008-04-25 06:49 PM


And sweet dreams to you!

ARCTIC WIND

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