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sandgrain
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Sycamore, IL, USA

0 posted 2008-03-25 08:35 PM


A snapshot of our country/city mixture
Traffic jams still unknown here
Highways close for our parades
Road signs warn of crossing deer

Sycamore, DeKalb's county seat
Boasts stately old homes to discover
Jack-o-lanterns on courthouse lawn
Before “Pumpkin fest” is over

Our giant dining room window
Lets us view two miles beyond
Traffic on two thoroughfares
And fields of golden corn

Glimpsing at snow’s melting blanket
Four robins caught my eye
As squirrels played tag in our maple,
Spring blew winter a kiss, “Goodbye.”

Some  homes, like ours, on our court
Sit on spacious double wide lots
People die to move in behind us
In the quiet cemetery plots

Classifieds  for computers, donkeys,
Laying hens and antiques
Corn mazes, stage plays, goats and hay
Whatever anyone seeks

Shops and box stores of every kind
Eateries and gas stations abound
NIU, in DeKalb, is nearby
We’re an ever expanding town

[This message has been edited by sandgrain (03-26-2008 10:40 AM).]

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1 posted 2008-03-26 01:48 AM


Wonderful poem on your home Rae, and I hope you don't mind I forwarded it to Michael (Balladeer) for inclusion in this year's submissions.  See his post for collecting of these
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2 posted 2008-03-26 03:35 AM


Most wonderful.  I like where you live.

A

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3 posted 2008-03-26 09:18 AM


Rae~
Thanks for this hon~
I just know it will be a great addition to our Community Poem pages~
Your homefront sounds lovely~

LOL -
'Road signs warn of crossing deer'
Yep ... we don't want to cross that DEER~
BallaDEER that is~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Margherita
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4 posted 2008-03-26 02:01 PM


quote:
Glimpsing at snow’s melting blanket
Four robins caught my eye
As squirrels played tag in our maple,
Spring blew winter a kiss, “Goodbye.”



Magical, dear Rae! Yes, this will be a wonderful contribution for the Community Poems 2008.

Love,
Margherita

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