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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams 
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Bitter Your words betray this heart you watched the truth bleed through Like you wanted it too So I escaped- or fell Thus I couldn't hear you Like you wanted me too I thought we knew better But all things must pass on Like you wanted it too I take comfort in fate That not everything goes Like I wanted it too -Juju -Juju -"So you found a girl Who thinks really deep thougts What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos [This message has been edited by Juju (03-25-2008 09:30 AM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
yes, it is good writing... enjoyed  love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
"I take comfort in fate"....profound. I enjoy reading your poems. They are good. |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Don't let that bitterness move into too long. Let it just dwell temporarily. Good writing .. you make my heart feel what you express so beautifully. A |
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Brian23 Member
since 2007-11-03
Posts 73Belfast, Ireland |
Very nice poem, enjoyed |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Wow, I am so glad all of you poets enjoyed my poem. -Juju -Juju |
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