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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2008-03-24 05:52 AM



bramble candy in balloons
with willing whirl winds
and kinky shoe high heels

you tied my thumbs together
then licked them wet softly
to make those butterfly sounds

when I struggled to fly by again
something about moths I guess
made you laugh out loudly

if you were wearing red ribbons
and your skin was hot coffee
which it was so often then

when you brought me morning snowcones


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daark

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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2008-03-24 07:11 AM



hmmm.. candy, balloons, whirl winds, butterflys, high heels and red ribbons Mr Daark... sounds like fun... enjoyed  RDB


Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Indigo
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2 posted 2008-03-24 02:28 PM


Feel a flashback coming on...

Good sense, innocence, cripplin' and kind.
Dead kings, many things I can't define.
Oh Cajun spice, sweats and blushers your mind.
Incense and peppermints, the color of thyme.


Tasty.

Indigo


Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2008-03-24 05:10 PM


ms r&b, thanks ms


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ms indi, and I just crossed the street with this one...you really should come to V town and  wear the air a bit..thanks babe

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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!
4 posted 2008-03-25 01:34 AM


Some lovely is almost silent.  Know what I mean?
Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2008-03-25 05:38 AM


ms ali-san, yes...I do understand your thought, thanks babe
Susan Caldwell
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6 posted 2008-03-25 02:05 PM


Yanno what I thought of when I read the first stanza?  Lollipops, Lace and Lipstick...it's a song..look it up.     Dang, I was such a nerd.

How you been?     

enjoyed your double entendres...as always.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2008-03-25 04:07 PM


Enjoyed...James
Dark Stranger
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8 posted 2008-03-25 05:11 PM


ms susan..a sexy nerd....thanks lady!

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thanks james

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