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ILoveTheRain
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since 2008-03-02
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GA

0 posted 2008-03-23 09:37 PM



The one that consumes the food given
Is beaten by and touched by the one who gives
Never to tell anyone
Her soul just barely lives

The day I witnessed this abuse
I go to the wise for her guidance
They won’t do much
Afraid, she is, by every glance

The day following today
I will accompany this helpless friend
She is afraid for her life,
But we will bring this to it’s very end



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Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
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Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2008-03-23 09:44 PM


ILoveTheRain,

Good luck in your endeavors.

Bobby

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
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Realm of Supernatural
2 posted 2008-03-24 10:34 AM


Emotion filled Write Indeed!

ARCTIC WIND

banished_fairy
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since 2006-10-02
Posts 31
Happy in H*ll, PA
3 posted 2008-03-24 11:51 PM


For anyone you had to fear someone who was supposed to love us, we are thankful for people like you. Beautiful write.
ILoveTheRain
Member
since 2008-03-02
Posts 157
GA
4 posted 2008-03-25 07:21 AM


Thank you for all of your comments. It's a hard situation, but we have the right help for her. Keep her in your prayers!!

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
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So. El Monte, California
5 posted 2008-03-25 03:38 PM


Bless you, Rain. We need more people like you. When I was about 10 one of my playmates told me that her Mother's boyfriend tried to molest her and she was afraid to tell but I wasn't and he was arrested. If more children were taught to speak up we wouldn't have so much abuse going on.
                                 Ida

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !
6 posted 2008-03-27 09:08 PM


an effective 'reality' write on a most important topic!

applause!

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