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simon
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since 2008-01-14
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London, England

0 posted 2008-03-23 08:20 AM


The first time I met her
we spent the night together.

The next time,
She told me how much she'd missed me
and then she kissed me
passionatly.

Then later on that week,
she pecked me on the cheek.

The next time I saw her,
she waved, before darting round a corner.

I never saw her again.

That's all.

© Copyright 2008 Simon parr - All Rights Reserved
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
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1 posted 2008-03-23 08:21 AM


smiles... gee Simon, that's a bit tough, but at least she waved and smiled at you!   Enjoyed this very much... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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Sydney, Australia
2 posted 2008-03-23 08:22 AM


oh ok, maybe she didn't smile but she did wave!     

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2008-03-27 02:19 PM


Sometimes when we think the
good one got away,
we never held them close enough
for a good look...

Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
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Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
4 posted 2008-03-27 02:50 PM


Be patient, watch, and wait Simon.  The right one will come along.

Bobby

passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2008-03-27 11:50 PM


wow...short lived I guess

well, better that it was I say

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