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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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0 posted 2008-03-22 08:02 AM



Hey there stranger
with eyes that soften
the inner sides of all I have
if I let your tanskin hands
touch me with ease
will you smile me again
and ooze words that offer
an insight to your soul
and gift me your presence
on my day




Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

© Copyright 2008 Roniece Dawson-Bruce - All Rights Reserved
effjayel
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1 posted 2008-03-22 08:24 AM


Hi Roniece, So it seems both spring & love is in the air down under....nice write,   John
Robert E. Jordan
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2 posted 2008-03-22 11:38 AM


Dear RDB,

This is very nice.  Is today your birthday?  If it is, happy birthday, if it isn't, happy birthday anyway.

Bobby

Marchmadness
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3 posted 2008-03-22 12:30 PM


Happy spring fever, Roniece.
                        Ida

Elaine
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4 posted 2008-03-22 01:54 PM


Hi Roniece,
One may never know what the smile could do for that stranger on any given day! Good write. Elaine


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5 posted 2008-03-22 02:54 PM


interesting 'write!'

applause!!

2islander2
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6 posted 2008-03-22 03:17 PM


hi Roniece, it is the  first time i read you and i am delighted. I know it is automn in australia but your poem is sunshine...

    thanks

     yann

Margherita
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7 posted 2008-03-22 03:42 PM


Sweet Roniece, you bring a smile with your inquiring words that speak of love.
May you always have reason to wear your bright smile, dear friend.

Love,
Margherita

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8 posted 2008-03-22 04:46 PM


How could he say no to one as beautiful as you?  How could anyone deny one who writes this?  I say that both are an impossibility.

Love,
Ali

JamesMichael
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9 posted 2008-03-22 05:00 PM


So nice...James
ctowen
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10 posted 2008-03-22 05:30 PM


takes the strange right out of it!!  : )

Happy Easter weekend!

Ct

Honeybunch
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11 posted 2008-03-23 04:44 AM


Love this dreamy write, Roniece!  
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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12 posted 2008-03-23 06:13 AM


thank you all my lovely Pipfriends for your wonderful comments... I appreciate you all very much.. love RDB

Yo' Bobby.. not my birthday (I get to celebrate it on Xmas Eve though!) but thanks for your good wishes... you made me smile   love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
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13 posted 2008-03-23 07:25 AM


ms r&b...if he wouldn't I would...kewl stuff ms
simon
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14 posted 2008-03-23 08:05 AM


Oh Roniece,

you give hope to strange people everywhere... Enjoyed...!

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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15 posted 2008-03-23 08:11 AM


Mr Daark.. thank you, I'll keep that in mind!     RDB

Simon...strange how you always make me smile!  thank you RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Gentle Spirit
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16 posted 2008-03-23 09:03 AM


My dear friend with a smile like yours how could he not??  This is a beautiful poetic wish m'dear.  Happy Sunday to you sweetie!!
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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17 posted 2008-03-24 07:42 AM


thank you my sweet friend Donna..  you do warm my heart with your words... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

banished_fairy
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18 posted 2008-03-24 11:54 PM


I know what that "look" can do to your soul. Touching write.
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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19 posted 2008-03-25 07:04 AM


Thank you BF... you are very kind to comment on my work... RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Sunshine
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20 posted 2008-03-25 09:37 AM



Delightfully warm, Roniece. Enjoyed this
one very, very much.


Rick
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21 posted 2008-03-25 02:30 PM


Dear Roniece, a beautiful write my friend, very much enjoyed.

Rick

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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22 posted 2008-03-25 07:22 PM


thank you Sunshine and Rick, your comments have brightened my day! love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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