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Open Poetry #42

the closed door

poddarku
Senior Member

since 2008-01-15

Posts 589
india

0 posted 2008-03-22 02:55 AM

The closed doors.

The closed doors look at his back.
You know they are insignificant!
He will not look back to see nameplates.
The sky welcomes a new wonderer,
A fellow of its eternity!
The hopping meadows and dingy streets,
The avenue of drunken city,
His doorless rooms and roofless clouds
His soulful foods shared with blue urchins…

The brass names on closed doors he’ll not see.
The sea of wind passes him saying
“ A time to go! A time to …” He knows.
Chimes whisper in his half deaf ears.
He knows at the End
The doors shall open
To satisfy curiosity.

clever talks delay friendship!

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2008-03-22 05:19 AM

Dear Ku, how magical! I love it, just peeked in, but I am in a hurry ... as always! But will enjoy your poem again later.
Love and hugs.
Margherita

effjayel
Senior Member

since 2007-09-30

Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity

2 posted 2008-03-22 08:29 AM

Ku, those closed doors bring out the inquisitive nature in us all..... well done

TinaTrivett
Senior Member

since 2006-07-15

Posts 569

3 posted 2008-03-22 11:39 AM

This is great. I love your poems...very visual. Good stuff.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2008-03-22 04:45 PM

Enjoyed...James

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2008-03-23 03:18 AM

quote:
A fellow of its eternity!
The hopping meadows and dingy streets,
The avenue of drunken city,
His doorless rooms and roofless clouds
His soulful foods shared with blue urchins…

Had to come back, as I said. And found further emotion within your universal words, dear Ku.

Love,
Margherita

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

6 posted 2008-03-23 05:54 AM

I so enjoyed these words from you Ku... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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