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Robert E. Jordan
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0 posted 2008-03-26 12:25 PM


A derelict finds Felix in an alley.  
Felix is tore-up pretty bad.  

Someone’s gotten bored
and thrown him there.  

The derelict takes him to
the emergency ward.  

The doctor cuts off Felix’s
knee high paten-leather boots,
to make him more comfortable.  

They patch him up
and fit him with a pair of slippers,
and a gown,
then put him to bed.  

The derelict shaves,
and checks on Felix next day.  

The derelict takes Felix home to his Mom,
who really didn’t notice him gone.  

Felix has a new friend,
right here in the land of the free,
and the home of the brave.      

Bobby

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Marchmadness
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1 posted 2008-03-26 01:39 PM


I'm glad Felix found a friend when he needed one.
                              Ida

Robert E. Jordan
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2 posted 2008-03-26 05:41 PM


Ida,

Yes, it's very lucky someone with a good heart found Felix that night.  Felix is his friend forever.  You've always been a good friend to Felix.  Of course, he says hello.

Bobby

Seoulair
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3 posted 2008-03-27 04:49 AM


heart warming story.
Robert E. Jordan
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4 posted 2008-03-27 07:58 AM


Seoulair,

Thanks for the good words on this one.  Felix will always remember Fred's kindness, and generosity.

Bobby

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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5 posted 2008-03-28 06:27 AM


smiles.... I like Fred Bobby... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Robert E. Jordan
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Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
6 posted 2008-03-28 07:30 AM


Dear RDB,

Fred's a big guy, as you may gather, Felix can stand some protection.

Bobby

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