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Open Poetry #42

Subtle Dimensions

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2008-03-20 07:40 PM

Subtle Dimensions

The almost ache of in-between
Day to night, night to day
All paths intersect at dream

Your eyes contain the map to Eden
Searching louder, through willow winds
Reticent palms, broad in beds of sedum

The skies change, inverting colors all
Against the bare breast of the harlequin moon
And Kindred I, shall my silver cloak fall

Truth pulses at the feminine equator
Drawing from the earth, linguist and soul translator
Into images of midnight, sleeping softly in ear drop
Of your sighs

Copyright Kkh 3/20/08

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2008-03-21 08:19 AM

quote:
Truth pulses at the feminine equator
Drawing from the earth, linguist and soul translator
Into images of midnight, sleeping softly in ear drop
Of your sighs

You caught these subtle dimensions perfectly with your haunting words.

Love,
Margherita

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

2 posted 2008-03-22 10:25 PM

Against the bare breast of the harlequin moon

Great image!

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