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effjayel
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At the Crossroads of Infinity

0 posted 2008-03-20 05:11 PM



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Okie Dokie...


Simple Steven met a heathen
Going to Toe’s lair
Said Simple Steven to the heathen
What have you got there…

(To which he replied)

“One of the greatest artifacts
Seen in many a long year
In vibrant colorful crayola wax
A new poem from Baladeer….”

Said simply Steven to the heathen
“Really? Do pray tell”
Said the heathen to simply Steven
“Yes, and my name’s Effjayel"

“But don’t tell me your ID
I have seen your picture on Pip
But actually up close
You have a real big nose
And the rest of you looks like a pile of..S..S.s s,

Seawasham, Yes! That’s it……

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"Ignorance is the Enemy...."

[This message has been edited by effjayel (03-21-2008 07:07 AM).]

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sewasham
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since 2006-09-11
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1 posted 2008-03-20 07:03 PM


Said simply Steven to the heathen
“Really? Do pray tell”
Said the heathen to simply Steven
“Yes, and my name’s Effjayel"


Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2008-03-20 08:24 PM


"In vibrant colorful crayola wax
A new poem from Baladeer….”

~ And as we all know, Balladeer's poetry is very suitable for children!


Linda

P.S. Steven had a great comeback! lol

effjayel
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At the Crossroads of Infinity
3 posted 2008-03-21 07:11 AM


Steve......


    

Excellent reply Steevo, as you can see, I have edited my original to include your contribution & added another verse. It was as Linda said,  a great comeback... Thanks for taking part  John

effjayel
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4 posted 2008-03-21 07:13 AM


Linda,  I second your view on Steves reply & also must agree that 'deers poems are suitable for kids, mostly the ones that cannot read.......
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