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Artic Wind
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0 posted 2008-03-20 12:17 PM





Spring Rain

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Spring rain falling down
Budding flora drinks its fill
Flowers soon to bloom


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ARCTIC WIND

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Robert E. Jordan
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1 posted 2008-03-20 12:52 PM


Artic Wind,

This is a nice picture-haiku combo.  I like it.

Bobby

Margherita
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2 posted 2008-03-20 01:14 PM


Very lovely, dear Arctic Wind!

It conveys a feeling of renewal.

Love,
Margherita

Marchmadness
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3 posted 2008-03-20 01:33 PM


Nice, ArticWind.
             Ida

Joyce Johnson
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4 posted 2008-03-20 01:38 PM


Very nice combo.  Joyce
effjayel
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5 posted 2008-03-20 01:55 PM


Perfection Michael....
simon
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6 posted 2008-03-20 06:39 PM


Arctic Wind,

It's officially Spring now so you can stop pleading for it to start!
Enjoyed this as usual...

Alison
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7 posted 2008-03-21 01:07 AM


Lovely, AW.  Very lovely.

A

Indigo
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8 posted 2008-03-21 01:27 AM


Artic-

My favorite poetry form!! You did honor to it.

Indigo

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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9 posted 2008-03-22 08:21 AM


Michael... this is just so beautiful!
Happy Easter my friend...   love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Toerag
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10 posted 2008-03-22 01:56 PM


Kinda funny how "Arctic Wind" creates such Springtime beautiful???
kitkat
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11 posted 2008-03-23 10:49 AM


This was beautiful..  I love Haiku

Life is a story waiting to happen..Go on.... Create, Live and Love

ThisDiamond
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12 posted 2008-03-23 05:45 PM


Superb!
nakdthoughts
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13 posted 2008-03-25 04:04 PM


I am also waiting for the blooming of Spring, soon I hope
nicely done, AW

M

Seoulair
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14 posted 2008-03-27 04:07 AM


A lily in rain
A young heart opens to love
the spirit of spring

JamesMichael
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15 posted 2008-03-29 05:16 AM


This is nice...James
LindsayP
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16 posted 2008-03-29 09:19 PM



Great picture, Great write,

Arctic Wind you wrote it well.

Lindsay

LindsayP
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17 posted 2008-03-29 09:24 PM



Seeing as that response went through

I'll submit another one that wouldn't register on your poem about the magnolia

tree, I thought that was one of your best poems ever. Write some more like that one my friend.

Lindsay

jwesley
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18 posted 2008-03-29 11:19 PM


Very fitting piece, my friend...lovely photo and words...

j.

passing shadows
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19 posted 2008-03-30 10:56 AM


just gorgeous! I love this!

Artic Wind
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20 posted 2008-04-02 07:29 PM


Robert-

Thank you so much!

ARCTIC WIND

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21 posted 2008-04-02 07:29 PM


Margherita-

Thanks!

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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22 posted 2008-04-02 07:29 PM


Marchmadness-

Thanks

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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23 posted 2008-04-02 07:30 PM


Joyce-

Glad you liked the Combo!

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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24 posted 2008-04-07 05:40 PM


Effjayel-

lol Thanks!

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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25 posted 2008-04-07 05:40 PM


Simon-

Thank you!



ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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26 posted 2008-04-07 05:41 PM


Alison-

Thanks

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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27 posted 2008-04-07 05:41 PM


Indigo-

Thanks

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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28 posted 2008-04-07 05:42 PM


RDB-

Thanks

ARCTIC WIND

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29 posted 2008-04-07 05:42 PM


Toerag-

Thank you so much!

ARCTIC WIND

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30 posted 2008-04-07 05:43 PM


Kitkat-

Thanks

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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31 posted 2008-04-07 05:43 PM


ThisDiamond-

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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32 posted 2008-04-07 05:43 PM


Nakdthoughts-

THANK YOU!

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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33 posted 2008-04-07 05:44 PM


Seoulair-

Thanks

ARCTIC WIND

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34 posted 2008-04-07 05:44 PM


JamesMichael-

Thank you so much!

ARCTIC WIND

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35 posted 2008-04-07 05:44 PM


LindsayP-

Thanks

ARCTIC WIND

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36 posted 2008-04-07 05:44 PM


Linsday-

Thanks

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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37 posted 2008-04-07 05:45 PM


Jwesely-

Thanks

ARCTIC WIND

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38 posted 2008-04-07 05:45 PM


Passing Shadows-

Thanks

ARCTIC WIND

hiddensmiles
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39 posted 2008-04-07 07:00 PM


Nicely written

JJ

Artic Wind
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40 posted 2008-04-07 07:20 PM


HiddenSmiles-

Thank you so much!

ARCTIC WIND

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