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Open Poetry #42
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Tomer
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since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168
Michigan
0 posted 2008-03-19 05:06 PM


The sunken soul,
Sunken ground,
Lions lounge with their paws
Around my faces drawn crawl,
And the sea doesn’t whisper,
Doesn’t sip the shore anymore,
It fades farther and farther,
Limitless with a teal horizon,
A tangent to the world’s cycle,
An unknown I can’t decipher.
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Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
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Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2008-03-19 05:51 PM

Tomer,

How many faces do you have.  Or do you mean "face's".

Bobby
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