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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2008-03-19 06:04 AM



it will be one of those mondays
in the middle of the weeks's forest
and you will have your busy on

like the gata when she prowls
with those looking back moments
taxi eyes taking glances

across the moments for a moment
just to drop off and return
then returning to make more

of what it is that makes me
want to want and watch those eyes
and those smile sides simmering

and those other places forbidden

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daark



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1 posted 2008-03-19 08:32 AM


"then returning to make more

of what it is that makes me
want to want and watch those eyes
and those smile sides simmering"

enjoyed watching you watch...

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2 posted 2008-03-19 10:53 AM


A coffee morning with some D poetry and I am happy.

A

Indigo
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3 posted 2008-03-19 01:45 PM


in redwood forests
there, her expression altered
by bent arm prayer.

Indigo


Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2008-03-19 06:00 PM


ms suesea, thanks babe for the touch


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ms ali-san, thank you little one for reading this one.


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ms indi, you enjoy the forests don't you babe? care to go for a walk sometime?

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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5 posted 2008-03-19 10:09 PM


beautiful Mr Daark... RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2008-03-20 05:53 AM


ms r&b, thanks babe
Gentle Spirit
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7 posted 2008-03-20 05:59 AM


Monday in the middle of the week..yep, this knows me well.  Enjoyed D.
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8 posted 2008-03-20 12:02 PM


Very Lovely!



ARCTIC WIND

Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2008-03-20 05:39 PM


ms gs, thanks babe


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a&w, thank you

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