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Spine Grinder
Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2008-03-18 08:52 PM



How do you
Do this to me
EVERY TIME?

My heart skips a beat,
My knees go weak,
You see this look in my eyes,
And you know-
You're still the one.
This "love" has me goin' crazy-
'Cuz I can't break away.
No, not from this...torment,
That you created-
Deep inside me that day..

So many days spent trying,
To forget all the nights of crying...
Over you....

Having thoughts that feel so hollow,
Someone help me with this sorrow.
It just doesn't want to fade,
This wasn't worth the price I paid.

My senses cause only confusion,
I can't seem to get past this illusion-
Of what once was-
Of what can never be-
Of this corrupted "love"-
      ...Something you could never see....

"The more you suffer, the more it shows you really care.." ~ The Offspring

"Oh every time I close my eyes...I lock it down..oh.." ~ Nelly & Tim Mcg

© Copyright 2008 Staci Weidner - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
1 posted 2008-03-18 09:19 PM


Very nice, Staci. Good to see your words again.
I hope this is just a poem, but many of us go through these times of heartache during our younger years.

M

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

2 posted 2008-03-19 08:52 AM


Stac, first just wanna say how much I've seen your writing grow, and I am so proud of you for that.

And I am so proud of the woman that you have become.  

Secondly, you know I know how this feels
and no matter how much it hurts, we make it through.   neice of mine.  

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