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Marchmadness
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0 posted 2008-03-18 01:08 PM


How strange it seems, I'm thinking,
as I'm driving down the street.
Before me the mountain peaks
are covered with snow,
so clean and white,
they seem to glow
in the bright sunlight
of this perfect, lovely day.

© Copyright 2008 Ida Werrett - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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1 posted 2008-03-18 01:13 PM


And isn't that a truly wonderful view and feeling, dear Ida? Thank you for letting me peek through your car window.

Very lovely.

Love,
Margherita

effjayel
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2 posted 2008-03-18 01:34 PM


Lovely Ida, I hope he snow has not melted when I am on the West Coast come May..... John
TinaTrivett
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3 posted 2008-03-18 03:09 PM


I've felt that feeling too..love this.
Robert E. Jordan
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4 posted 2008-03-20 10:17 AM


Ida,

This is a good description.  I like it loads.

Bobby

2islander2
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5 posted 2008-03-20 11:28 AM


hello Ida i enjoy your poetry...

   yann

Marchmadness
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6 posted 2008-03-20 01:32 PM


Thank you all for your kind comments. The weather here is beautiful and sunny but the mountains that tower over the San Gabriel Valley are covered  with snow and as I was driving toward them they seemed so close that I could reach out and touch them.
                                     Ida

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7 posted 2008-03-20 08:07 PM


how's that thing go?!:

"Winter, slumbering in the open air, wears on its smiling face a dream... of spring!"

fine 'write'!

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8 posted 2008-03-21 02:11 AM


You made me look out the window earlier today .. and I smiled.

Thank you for that, Ida.

Alison

JamesMichael
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9 posted 2008-03-22 06:27 AM


Reminding me of some of my motorcycle trips in California...we were headed North towards Bakersfield, I believe it was on the 5N, late at night and as we passed through the mountains it started to feel like we were in an icebox...there was no snow on the Freeway but there was snow on the mountains surrounding us.
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