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Margherita
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0 posted 2008-03-18 06:41 AM



     
Bringer of dawn by Rassouli

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Dawn stirs in love's skies

as each other's sun we rise

blushing horizons

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© Copyright 2008 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2008-03-18 06:57 AM


Very nice...James
Robert E. Jordan
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2 posted 2008-03-18 12:16 PM


Margherita,

This is a good Haiku and picture combination.

Bobby

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3 posted 2008-03-18 12:18 PM


Nice.
     Ida

effjayel
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4 posted 2008-03-18 02:37 PM


Maga, This is lovely....when I first saw the title, I saw it was an invitation from Toerag to me !    John x
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5 posted 2008-03-18 03:08 PM


This is lovely...well done.
2islander2
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6 posted 2008-03-18 03:14 PM


i would have like more of it....

    yann

Margherita
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7 posted 2008-03-19 03:40 AM


Thank you all from my heart, dear Poet friends!

Dawn has it in it! The new beginnings, the deep joy of being.

Love,
Margherita  

Just noticed that I am a Member Patricius!! Brava Margherita!!

[This message has been edited by Margherita (03-19-2008 08:37 AM).]

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8 posted 2008-03-19 10:38 AM


the strenghth of the middle line is too overwhelming. another shine from my friendly sun

clever talks delay friendship!

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9 posted 2008-03-19 10:55 AM


You make me smile in the morning -- what a gift you are, Margherita!

Love,
Alison

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10 posted 2008-03-19 11:08 AM


Rise and shine! ~ and it appears that that is what you and your love do each dawning light!

Blush on, Maga Margherita! It looks good on you!

Linda

Margherita
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11 posted 2008-03-20 03:58 AM


Thank you dear Ku, Alison and Linda Angel!

May your dawn invite you to dance through the day in the awareness of being pure beauty ...

Love,
Margherita

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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12 posted 2008-03-22 05:36 AM


a beautiful gift you bring dear Margharita... thank you for the beauty of you... love RDB x

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

simon
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13 posted 2008-03-22 07:29 AM


loved it...
Margherita
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14 posted 2008-03-23 04:36 AM


Thank you dear Roniece and dear Simon!
Love,
Margherita

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