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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2008-03-18 05:48 AM

we were water and sand places
fitting together without blending
I tied your hands with my eyes
you wove them in my mind

you said I blushed you sudden
like the winds that were voyeurs
at our stranger's windows
rattling their applauding fingers

then pressing their invisible
close to the see through wanting
just to notice nonchalantly
what we were trying hard not to

we made our rincon sound songs
there were highways to witness
but there was no sin signs posted
so we just left our love there

as slow dance footprint poems

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daark

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2008-03-18 06:23 AM

quote:
we made our rincon sound songs
there were highways to witness
but there was no sin signs posted
so we just left our love there

as slow dance footprint poems

And the "slow dance footprint poems" are awesome gifts for other witnesses too ...

Hauntingly beautiful, dear D.

Love,
Margherita

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

2 posted 2008-03-18 07:02 AM

yes, I feel these words Mr Daark... RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Indigo
Senior Member

since 2001-05-17

Posts 602

3 posted 2008-03-18 05:47 PM

February left
rincon waves playing catch up
to his shoreside poems.

Indigo

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2008-03-18 07:05 PM

ms mar,thank you ms for the touch

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ms r&b, thank you tanskin lady for the touch and smile

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ms indi...it is always febtime is it not..when we close our eyes and look back into moments? thanks babe

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2008-03-18 09:21 PM

so we just left our love there
as slow dance footprint poems

~smiling~ only you can come up with lines like that

M

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

6 posted 2008-03-18 10:22 PM

D

Some of your music haunts me. This is beautiful - and like Maureen says, only you can put words together the way you do. You weave beauty with poetry.

A

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

7 posted 2008-03-19 06:13 AM

ms MMs, thanks hon for the touch

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ms ali-san, thanks little one, you make me smile with your warm

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