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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2008-03-17 11:23 PM



One Drops

Singular
The welcome tapping of spring rain
One drops
Then another, and another
A rhapsody delights the earth
Building in momentum
Bidding promise and future
Singular
One drops
And then, another

Copyright Kkh 3/17/08

© Copyright 2008 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
Elaine
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1 posted 2008-03-18 01:31 AM


I liked this. It is has a nice rain to it!! Pun!! ha ha. enjoyed
Elaine


Margherita
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2 posted 2008-03-18 07:52 AM


There is a delightful feel to this, dear TD!

Love,
Margherita

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3 posted 2008-03-18 01:09 PM


Kathleen~
I'm so glad that I took a peek in at this little gem~

I adore the sound of a rhapsody ... you've written it well~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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effjayel
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4 posted 2008-03-18 01:37 PM


TD, that sounds a whole lot nicer than the rain I usually have to listen to. Although, I do enjoy being indoors at night & hearing it rattle on our tin chimney pipe   John
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5 posted 2008-03-18 04:16 PM


as long as there are no tornadoes doing
"megadrops"....I'll sit back and listen
to the pitter and patter of spring rains.

Thanx TD,  nicely written

The Lady
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6 posted 2008-03-20 01:52 PM




TD

I can feel the rain
gently building to a crecendo

lovely


secondhanddreampoet
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7 posted 2008-03-20 07:42 PM


a fine Spring 'write!'

I am especially fond of:

The welcome tapping of spring rain...

A rhapsody delights the earth...
Building in momentum
Bidding promise and future"

applause!!

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