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kudanesh
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0 posted 2008-03-17 08:20 AM



Daffodil

Such a happy thing to be in bloom
In the wind they bob their heads to the unheard tune
With a yellow fringe and a orange nose
They glisten in the sun after being watered with the hose
Water clings to the petals and the stem like crystal balls
They are happier in the ground than in a bucket on a stall
What ever the weather they bob their heads to that unheard tune
And there are hundreds of them like a rave dancing in bloom
When the sun shines they capture the light
And it even move beautiful when the light just right
As they dance bob and sway around
With their roots firmly holding them in the ground
They look inquisitive and such a nosy bunch
Just one of them on your dinner table or while you are having lunch
Can brighten up your day and make smile
Even if it just for a while
When you look at them it's like their saying how so you so
They also look really happy so should you
Well their color is bright green orange and yellow
The daffodil nothing but chilled and mellow

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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2008-03-17 09:08 AM


I eagerly await springtime and daffodils showing their happy faces! Alas, will be quite awhile yet, for we are snowed in at the present time.

Thank you for letting me enjoy them in advance, through your joyful poem!

Love & Daffodil Light

EA

Margherita
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2 posted 2008-03-17 02:32 PM


Dear Andrew, this is such a tender and joy and light filled poem! You bring Spring with your lovely words!

I sure love a bunch of them, but even only one is already a precious gift to enjoy, you are so right! They are simply spectacular!

Love,
Margherita


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3 posted 2008-03-17 03:52 PM




HAPPY ST.PATRICK'S DAY


ARCTIC WIND

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Gaia
4 posted 2008-03-18 06:54 PM


I especially enjoyed the first stanza!

"Such a happy thing to be in bloom
In the wind they bob their heads to the unheard tune"

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