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Margherita
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0 posted 2008-03-16 11:48 AM






*

Breathing God


I see you climbing lonely hills
burdened by all the mysteries
randomly gathered over the years.
From atop the world you scrutinize
frosty cosmic valleys of tears
and shiver in the grip of solitude.

You long for soothing replies.

A tiny flower wants your eyes
to reflect its charm upon your soul.
As if guided by soft petal whispers
you feel ready for contemplation.
To those who are willing to listen
nature offers deepest revelations.

You long for a new awareness.

See how the little flower sways
how it graciously dances in the breeze?
How it bravely withstands the storms?
See how it surrenders to its fate,
how it displays its innate loveliness?
It smiles right into the Creator’s eyes!

It makes love to the air and to the sun
to the stars and to the moon,
it gracefully receives the rain
and awakens to the caress of dew.
It opens to life without fear,
it asks for nothing, it just is.
Yet it is never ever lonely,
for it quietly breathes God.

You long for true oneness.

Do you hear the flower’s love sighs?
In gratitude it sings its song of praise!
It really says you are never alone,
not even in midst of nowhere!
You are immersed in divine essence
clinging to your skin, mind, heart and soul!
Peel off the layers ofencumbrances,
it’s time for you now to sing along …

…. breathing God.

*



© Copyright 2008 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2008-03-16 11:57 AM


Oh, how I needed this!
You have managed to convey what has been pulsing in my soul.  For this, I thank you.

effjayel
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2 posted 2008-03-16 12:00 PM


Margherita, I was going to thank you for bringing me a breath of spring then realised, it was actually the kiss of life...  You are a very special Lady....John
2islander2
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3 posted 2008-03-16 12:14 PM


Hello Margherita very well crafted. Enjoyed it and the philosophical subject, there are so much things near us that give sense.

  Have a nice day


   yann

simon
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4 posted 2008-03-16 12:15 PM


I agree with the others. This IS a quite beautiful to read on a Sunday.
Earth Angel
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5 posted 2008-03-16 12:26 PM



"It makes love to the air and to the sun
to the stars and to the moon,
it gracefully receives the rain
and awakens to the caress of dew.
It opens to life without fear,
it asks for nothing, it just is.
Yet it is never ever lonely,
for it quietly breathes God."

Margherita, ye be such a flower.



With love,

Angelo Terrestre

Robert E. Jordan
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6 posted 2008-03-16 12:41 PM


Margherita,

This is a nice tribute to the species man.

Bobby

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7 posted 2008-03-16 12:51 PM


Marghertia!

This is so lovely! Very beautifully written!

ARCTIC WIND

Marchmadness
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8 posted 2008-03-16 03:14 PM


Margharita, you have such a deep and beautiful soul and it shines like a beacon of hope in this poem.
                                  Ida

JamesMichael
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9 posted 2008-03-16 05:22 PM


Indeed a pleasure to read...and again...James
LindsayP
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10 posted 2008-03-16 09:02 PM



Yes Marherita you are a special lady

to write the way you do. That is one great post, much enjoyed.

Lindsay

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11 posted 2008-03-17 05:57 AM


ms mar, your soul is god touched...enjoyed this
Gentle Spirit
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12 posted 2008-03-17 06:02 AM


Lady, this is most beautiful.  Lovely writing
sewasham
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13 posted 2008-03-17 10:20 AM


Very beautiful and uplifting. Take care and Have fun. Steve


poddarku
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14 posted 2008-03-17 11:35 AM


i always draw inspiration from you. your this one is also serene

clever talks delay friendship!

Margherita
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15 posted 2008-03-17 01:51 PM


Thank you all for the loving replies, dear poet friends! You warmed my heart.

Cherishing you.
Margherita

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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16 posted 2008-03-17 06:57 PM


stunning write Margherita.. beautiful and stunning... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Margherita
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17 posted 2008-03-18 06:45 AM


Thank you dear Roniece!
You were missed!

Love and hugs.
Margherita

The Lady
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18 posted 2008-03-20 01:19 PM




what could be more perfect than this:

"A tiny flower wants your eyes
to reflect its charm upon your soul."  

Margherita you delight my eyes
and soul

Margherita
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19 posted 2008-03-20 01:20 PM


((((Kate)))) and you delight me with your presence here!

Thank you.

Love,
Margherita

sandgrain
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20 posted 2008-03-20 10:53 PM


This is so special.  It is indeed, a reflection of the author.

God bless,
   Rae

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21 posted 2008-03-20 11:34 PM


Oh dear lady...your poetry is inclusive of all religions. It speaks a spirituality that reveals that you not only talk the "talk"--you walk the walk.

This is perfection, and you are a lovely spirit indeed.


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22 posted 2008-03-21 01:51 AM


Margherita,

I think you breathe life into poetry - you exude beauty, love and celebration.

Alison

Margherita
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23 posted 2008-03-21 09:17 AM


Dear Rae, Karen and Alison, thank you from my heart. You bless me.

I just try to walk the walk, dear Karen, sometimes I stumble ...

Love and hugs.
Margherita

Honeybunch
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24 posted 2008-03-21 03:51 PM


Margherita - You are most certainly an inspiration to us all.  Thank you for this beautiful poem on a night when I needed to read it.  


Helen

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25 posted 2008-03-21 04:27 PM


Margherita~
Such total beauty here~

Beautiful thoughts from a beautiful lady~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -             noles1@totcon.com   

Margherita
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26 posted 2008-04-07 05:40 PM


Thank you dear Helen and dear Marge for your kind words!

Love,
Margherita

Larrysmom
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27 posted 2008-04-08 01:01 AM


Dear Margherita, the beauty of this poem is beyond my words…

Tammy<333

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28 posted 2008-04-08 07:33 AM


now I will take this one for me

you have made my day dear Magherita!

Susan Caldwell
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29 posted 2008-04-08 08:02 AM


wisdom and sensitivity...you possess both..

"You long for a new awareness."

yes....

always...

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

gilead
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30 posted 2008-04-08 09:33 AM


A breath of fresh air on a somber April morning. Thanks for the marvelous gift.

Art

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31 posted 2008-04-08 10:03 AM


This is so inspiring and you have certainly brightened my morning.

Blessing on you, Marti

gilead
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32 posted 2008-04-08 10:23 AM


A breath of fresh, spring air on a too still morning! Thanks for the gift!

Art

Margherita
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33 posted 2008-04-08 11:03 AM


Oh, what a surprise to find this one on top right now!
Thank you from my heart dear Tammy, dear Dixie, dear Susan, dear Art and dear Marti, for the loving replies, for telling me you appreciated it.

Have all a wonderful day.
Here it is raining, it's all grey, but the sun shines within, always!

Love,
Margherita

Robert E. Jordan
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34 posted 2008-04-08 11:53 AM


Yo Margherita,

You might be interested to know, that my parish is having "Margherita Madness" on April 25 and 26.  Rum, Tequila, grass skirts, etc.

Do us urban cat lickers have more fun or what?

Bobby

Margherita
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35 posted 2008-04-08 12:02 PM


Lol, Bobby, you mean Margherita-Daisy Madness, Pizza Margherita Madness or "St. Margherita" Madness?? Grass skirts? How funny! With all that Tequila stuff everybody will end up stretched out on the grass in the end I fear!
Yes I think you know how to have fun in your parish. God enjoys us when we are celebrating life.
Thank you for the smiles.
Love,
Margherita

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