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hiddensmiles
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since 2008-02-07
Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

0 posted 2008-03-15 07:02 PM


there is beauty
all around us
everyday
flowers,
trees,
snow,
and sometimes even hay
life is a beautiful thing
when
lived the right way
so take your time
look around
breath in some fresh air
and just slow down


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Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
1 posted 2008-03-15 07:08 PM


Good advise, Hiddensmiles.
                          Ida

jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
2 posted 2008-03-15 07:11 PM


Nice write, my friend.

j.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2008-03-15 07:23 PM


I'll second that...James
effjayel
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since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity
4 posted 2008-03-15 07:25 PM


Thanks for the timely reminder, I had forgot but I'm chillin' now...
hiddensmiles
Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514
at the beach... i wish
5 posted 2008-03-16 02:52 PM


no problem
hiddensmiles
Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514
at the beach... i wish
6 posted 2008-03-19 12:04 PM


when i wrote it i was reminding my self

JJ

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