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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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West Coast

0 posted 2008-03-15 06:45 AM



so speaks the earl of meander's jewel
through the valley of a laughing morn
when the shiny shoes are adrift in slumber

godless as the numbers on their sleeves
blasphemy in leather bucketfuls
with no remaining lists to fill

only the highway side of this heaven
and the solo saddled demon's wing
sweet urgery in salty chrome silence

a brotherhood remains unfathered
even god blesses the wicked who ride
with a icy wind to sooth their wounds

and a curve to guide them to their end
_______________

daark (in owg skin...rip for the road pan man)



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poddarku
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since 2008-01-15
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india
1 posted 2008-03-15 06:58 AM


as ever sarcastic yet different with the vanity

clever talks delay friendship!

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2008-03-15 07:13 AM


thanks pod...just a tribute to a scooter bum we scattered ash for
Margherita
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Eternity
3 posted 2008-03-15 03:06 PM


quote:
a brotherhood remains unfathered
even god blesses the wicked who ride
with a icy wind to sooth their wounds

and a curve to guide them to their end



Tremendous writing that will stay with me for long after I'll close this box ...

(it also reminded me of the night when I received a phone call from my son who said with a trembling voice "I  a m   a l i v e   M o m ... " adding that only the motorbike was dead ... he had almost met with his last curve!)

Love.
Margherita

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2008-03-16 07:19 AM


mon mar...thanks for the read ms..seems we lose  several lately...guess it is just the time for some..in the mean time the highway is lovely, like a woman with beckoning fingers..
Gentle Spirit
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5 posted 2008-03-16 08:54 AM


I have always loved OWG's skin.  You do a brother proud in this one babe.  
Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2008-03-16 09:22 AM


ms gs..he went proud..and fast

thanks ms

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