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WindWalker
Senior Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 1218

0 posted 2008-03-14 04:45 PM

I meet her upon giant sandy dunes
above the ever-restless green sea.
As the sun rises, as the sun sets,
so does the love we share upon
the turbulent shores of earth.

We could move mountains
just with our laughter under the moon:
we know a love so deep.
But few, alas, can understand
and categorized as such a great sinner,
how can she touch the tears of earth?

But I know what I feel,
and how can something that feels so good,
be so wrong? – the old question!
I feel even God must have known hunger
within the flow of her passion;
had to experience, to bear,
temptation – even from her shadow.

And we spend the sultry Summer,
running, laughing, swimming, loving
while the sea tosses as wild as our hearts!
And I know what we share is real
as surely as I know it is not yet to be found
in man’s world and thoughts about love:
for where limits are set upon one’s love,
there, the Goddess energy will not move.

But even if we made our time stand still,
other forces keep the tick-tock going:
the breeze will turn cold,
the leaves change colour,
and the great flocks, crying, pass over;
and she too will leave for another place then,
for these winters are still too cold
and this man’s world has yet to prepare
a hearth of love she could call home.

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2008-03-14 06:09 PM

WindWalker,

This is not too bad. Remember, if it feels good, do it, it can't be wrong.

Bobby

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2008-03-14 06:50 PM

Oh My...This is ABSOLUTELY lovely...

I'm speechless to speak of the beauty in this.

Perfect.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

3 posted 2008-03-14 06:59 PM

I am not big on love poems simply because a great number of them border on "silly" but leave it to you WindWalker to change my mind.
Ida

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2008-03-15 03:15 PM

Nice...James

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2008-03-15 03:52 PM

"And we spend the sultry Summer,
running, laughing, swimming, loving
while the sea tosses as wild as our hearts!"

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

6 posted 2008-03-15 09:20 PM

The soothing flow of your words, brought great relief in their message. This destiny must be dreamed, and in the thought become the deed. Far more sacred than the surface. nicely done.

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

7 posted 2008-03-15 10:39 PM

Enjoyed your thoughts
WindWalker!

ARCTIC WIND

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