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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2008-03-14 03:44 PM

Someones Future

See that ambulance
in front of you?
One day you're going
to need one when
you get old and grey.
Or maybe you'll
be involved in
a traffic accident,
it could happen anyday.
Say hello to a
person of age
and wish them
a wonderful day
and don't drink
and drive and
take someones
future away.
LOL.

JamesLee
14March
2008

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

1 posted 2008-03-14 03:47 PM

Words worth saying, James. I know so many people who have suffered tragedy at the hands of a drunk driver.
Ida

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

2 posted 2008-03-14 05:11 PM

I enjoyed your poem a lot james, to risk its own life OK but it is cruel and selfish and mindless to risk other innocent lives, it's a very good poem....

2islander2

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2008-03-15 05:56 AM

Thank you Marchmadness and 2islander2 for the nice responses...James

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

4 posted 2008-03-17 06:59 PM

enjoyed your thoughts James as always my friend... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

5 posted 2008-03-17 07:06 PM

enjoyed your poem very much

JJ

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2008-03-18 06:44 AM

Thank you Roniece and hiddensmiles for the wonderful responses...James

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2008-03-18 07:22 AM

Wonderful advice, dear James!

Love,
Margherita

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

8 posted 2008-03-18 12:05 PM

James,

This has good, sneaky, end rhymes. I don't understand the LOL at the end though.

Bobby

effjayel
Senior Member

since 2007-09-30

Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity

9 posted 2008-03-18 02:42 PM

Well written James & a very serious message... John

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2008-03-18 05:22 PM

Thank you Margherita, Robert and effjayel for the wonderful responses...James

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

11 posted 2008-03-18 11:25 PM

James,

I like this a lot and agree with all the responses. Like Bobby though, I got to the end and the "LOL" and wondered .. why? Why end this with LOL? Is there a reason that I don't see. It distracts.

Otherwise, I think this is a fine message.

Alison

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

12 posted 2008-03-19 06:47 AM

Thank you Alison for the wonderful response...as for the LOL, I have no reasonable explanation...I followed my impulse...James

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

13 posted 2008-03-19 09:04 PM

(grins at James)

That explanation works for me!

A

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

14 posted 2008-03-19 09:11 PM

whatever

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