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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Love Police A conversation between a man and a woman... So have you thought of the words I said, about the possibilities of a me and a you? Absolutely--- And how do my desires resonate with you? Well, let me respond in this way. You're on a one way street and I'm cruising on Santa Monica Boulevard--- Allright, that was you're last chance. I'm calling the love police and you'll probably get a ticket. For what?--- For breaking on my heart. JamesLee 14March 2008 Just playing around. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
James, This is fairly clever. It has a nice twist. Bobby |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
It has a certain elegance about it. Well done. Art |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
enjoyed your poem, very cute and funny, i appreciated the love police.... yann |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Good one James but just make sure you don't get pulled up by the traffic police. It's more expensive. Lindsay |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Robert, gilead, 2islander2 and Lindsay for the wonderful responses... I know Lindsay, a guy from work got a drinking and driving ticket and he went through hell; moneys paid, classroom lessons, suspended license and so forth, but he appears to have learned his lesson well...I know that lots of accidents involve drunk drivers and speeders... Wouldn't it be interesting if there were indeed "Love Police" that would intervene and speak on your behalf. Would be my luck they would take the womans side...James |
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