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Soul Mate |
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K-K Member
since 2008-03-13
Posts 153Indiana 
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When I look into the future I wonder often where I'll be knowing with every ending you are right there next to me Many fear what lies ahead and the thought of growing old yet mine are at all ease Since I have you to hold Other people lead the way for their beloved "better half" Yet we stand side by side always making the other laugh Most relationships are hard and often filled with lies With you I see the realness just by looking in your eyes Upon the morning of each day I wake with you next to me It is another day of peace from a love that is so deep When your face puts on a smile it can take my breath away your laughter, so infectious makes life worth every day We compliment each other and fit just like a glove No one can take away our undenying love There are no hidden stories no excuses, no regrets Our bond can not be broken Our future forever connects It is certain there'll be days much harder than we think We must take one at a time and remember not to blink And as we do get older and the gray has filled our hair Don't doubt you are my soul mate Beside you, I will be there!!! |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
very nice  |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Kris, that is so lovely.... |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
You are lucky to have such a wonderful soulmate to help you endure the hardships of life. Very nice tribute. Ida |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful...James |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
K-K, I'd think about loosening this up a little. The thought is there, however, it comes across as a little forced. Make sure you don't lose meaning just to have end words rhyme. Bobby |
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K-K Member
since 2008-03-13
Posts 153Indiana |
Thank you for your comments, I actually wrote this on the fly for my husbands B-day. We still have alot to deal with since the loss of Cory, but soon I will focus on that loss more, and try to improve from there. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
it's all about love, i enjoyed very much yann |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
A lovely sensitive poem Kris, I wish you everything you wish yourself. Have a great day my dear and may the sun shine upon you. Lindsay |
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