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0 posted 2008-03-14 03:05 AM


Sheryl’s Story


Sheryl told the story of a child wronged
Her voice was steady, message strong
Clear blue eys gazed upon the crowd
Secrets, once buried, now shared out loud

Some eyes dropped down or looked away
Some didn't want to hear what she had to say
Discomfort written clearly on their face
Yet, Sheryl displayed a survivor’s grace

Her words reached out to hearts and minds
Some wondered if they had missed the signs
Many spilled teardrops of surprise
Perhaps cries for help went unrecognized

Sheryl spoke with self-taught dignity and grace
Sadly, her childhood lost can never be replaced
Candidly, she told of molestation once endured
Her story now is told - will her story be heard

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Alison



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1 posted 2008-03-14 03:18 AM


wonderful write!
Understood, and related to

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2 posted 2008-03-14 03:51 AM


timothysangel,

Thank you so much.  You sound like a kindred spirit.

I changed this a lot - I just didn't like the version that you read.

Thank you for reading and responding with so much compassion.

Alison

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3 posted 2008-03-14 04:11 AM


Fine writing...James
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Thank you, James.  I am writing this for a friend of mine - keep coming in and fine-tuning it.  Sheryl is a real person who talked to a group today - I had the honor of listening to her - and I was proud.

She and I share many things, sadly - this is one.

Alison

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5 posted 2008-03-14 05:05 AM


The first step is always the hardest. I applaud her courage for starting the recovery process.It will sometimes seem an impossible task but there will be setbacks & flash backs as she attempts to bury the ghosts. I am so pleased for her that you are the kind ear that she has to help her through the dark times. Give my regards to Sheryl & let her know that there will be light at the end of the tunnel, she must now follow the path to the end. She has the support, she just needs to nurture the belief.   John
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6 posted 2008-03-14 10:15 AM


I am sharing this with a friend who may now have the courage by reading this to do the same-thank you
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7 posted 2008-03-14 11:25 PM



That is a very sad poem Alison but

beautifully written, thanks for sharing.

Lindsay

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8 posted 2008-03-15 04:26 PM


Thank you, John.  Sheryl's story, unfortunately, is the story of many of us.  She is way beyond starting to talk about it -- she is publically speaking out -- as am I.

Thank you, my friend,
A

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9 posted 2008-03-15 04:27 PM


firestorm,

I have written about this in the prose section of PiP also.  I think there are two or three entries from me.  You are welcome to share those with her too .. anything that can help her.

xoxoxo
Alison

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10 posted 2008-03-15 04:28 PM


Lindsay,

Thank you.  I think I struggled more with this poem than any I have written.  I want it to be right - Not sure if it is there yet, but I had to set it aside.

Thank you and I am glad that you are here.

Alison

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