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spiked
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0 posted 2008-03-13 09:34 PM


Breaking the barrier of words
Can you hear my silent scream
inside an ache I feel so deep
another hidden dream
Please see me standing here
no reaction do i see
lost in isolation, fear
the struggles killing me
what are these whispers coming in
from places I don't know
is my mind out of control
I am the beauty
that you see
respond as if to show
That I am

© Copyright 2008 Richard Rendall - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
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1 posted 2008-03-13 09:56 PM


Of course you are, lovie.

It's been kind of a rough ride, huh?

You know where I am if you need an ear.


spiked
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2 posted 2008-04-16 09:40 PM


not written from my perspective but how i see someone elses. thanks seren
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