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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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0 posted 2008-03-13 04:26 PM



you were go cart lovely
with oil on your shoes
making woman shapes too early

for most men to look away from
like a fern in summer windows
you said you changed cars more

than I did the movie channels
and you knew my remote was worn
so I dressed up on mondays

pretending to be your bicycle
with slippery pedals on
so you would climb the stairs closer

and let the blind of me know you


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daark

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2008-03-13 04:52 PM


we're barely getting into spring,
and here you are with summer sounds...


Artic Wind
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2 posted 2008-03-13 06:16 PM


I love spring Myself

ARCTIC WIND

Indigo
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since 2001-05-17
Posts 602

3 posted 2008-03-13 07:23 PM


for in the blindness
is heartfelt knowing, how she
turns night into day

Yeah... start me up...

Indigo



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Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-27
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4 posted 2008-03-14 03:59 AM


D

It's that time of night when I smile at the words you share, the poetry you write - and damn, how do you put it all together to make it so fine?

G'nite, my friend.
A

Dark Stranger
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West Coast
5 posted 2008-03-14 05:54 AM


ms sun, thanks blessing lady, you make me smile

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a&w, thank you for the touch here


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ms indi, don't be shy, come closer, you would like how she strides the coastline..thanks babe


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ms ali-san, good m'ning little one, thank you for the reads and replies

firestorm
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6 posted 2008-03-14 10:11 AM


lovely images of....well...just lovely images
Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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7 posted 2008-03-14 03:26 PM


ms firestorm...the well made me smile, thanks ms
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