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scarlet
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0 posted 2008-03-12 07:34 PM


Hi my names scarlet monahan, i am an artist. Sometimes my art influences my writing, I would class my work as performance poety,

here is one of my pieces

WHEN TWO WORLDS COLLIDE

High up high the high bird flew
To wing at pillow cloud
Toothless smile his too full pile
Fell speedy t�ward the crowd

She, smiling at the deepest blue
Then closing eyes to dream
High bird left his message �pon
Her soon consumed ice cream

By Scarlet Monahan
  

[This message has been edited by Balladeer (03-14-2008 05:48 PM).]

© Copyright 2008 scarlet - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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1 posted 2008-03-12 07:48 PM



If I read this right, then
welcome to the blue skies of Pips!

Robert E. Jordan
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2 posted 2008-03-12 09:09 PM


Scarlet,

Funny.  You go girl.

Bobby

amusemi
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3 posted 2008-03-12 11:18 PM


I can't wait 'til Toerag reads this!  He's got some competition!  Scarlet...check out the works of Toerag.  Great write...and funny!
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4 posted 2008-03-13 03:10 AM


Welcome, scarlet.  I love that you came in and made us laugh.  Great way to start - dang, this is funny.  

Alison

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5 posted 2008-03-13 03:42 AM


Enjoyed...James
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6 posted 2008-03-13 03:09 PM


Welcome, good first post...
Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2008-03-13 04:18 PM


ms scar...enjoyed the penspeak and the photography...great eye..
Artic Wind
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8 posted 2008-03-13 06:16 PM


Welcome to pip!



ARCTIC WIND

scarlet
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9 posted 2008-03-14 08:50 AM


thankyou, Midnitesun,Robert E. Jordan, amusemi, Alison, JamesMichael, effjayel, Dark Stranger and Artic Wind for such a great welcome, i hope to make many new frinds,  read great poetry and post more to.

scarlet


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10 posted 2008-03-14 03:17 PM


Greatly enjoyed...
Marchmadness
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11 posted 2008-03-14 03:58 PM


This is very funny, Scarlet. Always love to welcome a new poet with a sense of humor.
                                   Ida

[This message has been edited by Marchmadness (03-14-2008 07:26 PM).]

LindsayP
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12 posted 2008-03-14 11:14 PM



Nice post Scarlet and a warm welcome to PIP

You will make a lot of good friends here.

Lindsay

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13 posted 2008-03-16 04:55 PM




wonderful first post
I like your style
funny!

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