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Open Poetry #42

Lies Of A Loss

A Beautiful Disaster
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since 2007-01-13

Posts 409

0 posted 2008-03-12 05:13 PM

Going away,
I take one last look behind,
But I can't believe those precious days
Were never more than lies.
I'm locking all,
Burying memories inside,
Maybe I've become so heartless,
But I'm leaving love behind.
I'm leaving you alone -
Figure out your lonesome life,
Find the answers by yourself,
But don't drown in your lies.
Draw the dots above
All your letters 'i' and live,
But you'll never know love
If just for love you can't forgive.
Swallow your last words -
I'm not interested in them;
In front of you is loneliness,
But you will blame yourself.
Candles are going out -
With them trust, devotion fade...
On your side were they illusions?
How could a heart pretend?
At the edge of hope
Watch my recent dreams come by,
I feel empty and so lonely -
Wonder if those dreams were mine.
Everything that's left
Is my life, inside it burns,
It's the greatest will to live
No matter how my road turns.
I'm still thankful for that flame,
I'll remember you for it,
I'll remember you for lies you told me,
Lies that I believed...
Throwing to your face
My last hope, I leave...

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2008-03-14 04:21 AM

Fine writing...James

effjayel
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since 2007-09-30

Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity

2 posted 2008-03-14 04:57 AM

enjoyed, John

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

3 posted 2008-03-14 10:44 AM

Enjoyed the Write!

ARCTIC WIND

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