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Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175
VA

0 posted 2008-03-12 04:56 PM



Of all the stars that shine
you are the one that shines brightest in my life

Of all the dreams that pass through my heart
you're the one that stays on my mind

Of all the friends in my life
you're the one I would sacrifice everything for

When I'm at my lowest
when I feel like I'm losing control
you're the one I turn to
you're the one who just knows

I don't have to tell you what's wrong
I don't have to feel ashamed
because you always read my mind

I can always be myself
You have the key to my heart
because I know you won't break it
I trust you more
than you'll ever know

Out of all the people in my life
I love you most of all

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

© Copyright 2008 Kristen Brandon - All Rights Reserved
effjayel
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since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity
1 posted 2008-03-12 05:10 PM


Hey! Love is in the air in Fraggle rock, I must relocate....Good job    John
Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
2 posted 2008-03-12 06:29 PM


Interesting Write

ARCTIC WIND

BugBuggy
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since 2005-12-19
Posts 130
michigan
3 posted 2008-03-13 05:56 PM


enjoyed reading this very much

BugBuggy

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2008-03-15 04:52 PM


Wonderful...James
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
5 posted 2008-03-15 05:45 PM


It is apparent that you have a heart that loves deeply. May it be in safe hands.


EA

jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
6 posted 2008-03-16 08:50 PM


Enjoyed my friend...it's wonderful to feel that way, isn't it.

j.

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