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HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
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0 posted 2008-03-12 12:35 PM



Felt Lonely Without You

The reason I am asking
I have been all out of rhyme
Your visits were to brief
Stay a little longer next time

I hope you will call again
Come and whet my appetite
Perhaps share a dream
Where you enter in my night

The inspiration you gave
I had hoped for continuation
This is my heart request
Here in this written invitation

I shall await your answer
While you think this through
Please keep me in mind
I have felt lonely without you


HopeĀ©2008

The poem at the URL below with music and graphic
http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/105/poem_91034884.html

© Copyright 2008 HopeS - All Rights Reserved
LadyTom
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since 2008-02-29
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1 posted 2008-03-12 12:52 PM


sad song of a lonely heart. beautiful. Love the read.
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2008-03-12 01:46 PM


My dear Hope, there is always hope!

Actually, there is more than just hope once he reads this tempting "written invitation"!

Hugs 'n High Hopes,
Linda

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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3 posted 2008-03-12 03:34 PM


Nice...James
effjayel
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4 posted 2008-03-12 03:52 PM


I trust that was RSVP Hope?
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