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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA 
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The blisters on a heart that bleeds The scars are left Relief I need To break this cycle Of remorce returns again To run its course Echos of that sound I hear Heartbeat pounding Full of fear Why does this Kaos Run my life Am I deserving of this strife The words I never Found to say or let slip by Not finding its way All thats left are these scars of regret |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...hopefully scars of regret remind us to do better next time...James |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You conveyed the emotions powerfully and clearly, Richard. Hope you will be able to step out of the grip of remorse, as you can't change the past, but you can change now, as James also suggests. Love, Margherita |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Emotioned Filled Write indeed ARCTIC WIND |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Very emotive Rich & much enjoyed John |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Thank you all very Much. Been crazy of late will try to post more soon |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
So good to see you here and with such sad but beautiful words...have missed you |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Thank you Paula Beena long time, |
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