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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2008-03-11 11:05 PM

posing in smoke
like a gunfighter's urges
going for the kill you say
with your willing waiting
to be spent on dream skins

I am the wax man in leather
wearing stamps from a nether's land
like a jaguar you are
slendering my unravel
and my pen slowly weeps

you mention the pressure
that builds before explosions
and tell me you prefer them then
when they are volcanos
with the triggers pulled

and you will be back often
with trick or treat nylons on
a juicy duelist
with water pistol cannons
just waiting to drown my eyes

with a bond girl's whisper
___________

daark

matronmedusa
Member

since 2008-03-08

Posts 89
Alabama, USA

1 posted 2008-03-11 11:07 PM

Intriguing...

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2008-03-11 11:13 PM

ms matronmedusa, thank you for the eyes..am pleased to welcome you to the pipden.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2008-03-12 06:05 AM

*smilin here*

just smiling....love it big daddy

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2008-03-12 07:47 AM

Wow, that's some story! Incredibly volcanic stuff in poetic high-class outfit.

Love,
Margherita

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

5 posted 2008-03-12 09:48 AM

Very Nice write! and Story

ARCTIC WIND

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

6 posted 2008-03-12 05:17 PM

"you mention the pressure
that builds before explosions
and tell me you prefer them then
when they are volcanos
with the triggers pulled"

for reals...

Indigo
Senior Member

since 2001-05-17

Posts 602

7 posted 2008-03-12 07:49 PM

trick or treat nylons
peeled away in slow whispers
urged by Dr. No

Pedal to the metal for sure on this one, D...

Indigo

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

8 posted 2008-03-13 03:18 AM

D

I just sat here with this comment box open, still mesmerized by your words. It's how they flow and weave your tales and how they peek out from your eyes.

It's all of those things that kept me momentarily silent (and those who know me well .. would congratulate you and tell you that is a real accomplishment on your part!).

A

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

9 posted 2008-03-13 04:25 AM

yes, Mr Daark, I hope to be back often.. love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

10 posted 2008-03-13 06:05 AM

ms gs, your smiles are naughty, thanks

__________________________
ms mar, thank you so much lady friend

_______________

a&w, thank you for the eyes here

_______________

ms suesea, thanks babe, you make me..well you know

_______________

ms indi, hey lady...we should do coffee sometime, wear the nylons..thanks babe

__________________

ms ali-san, little one, you make the daddy mind of me smile, thank you
_____________

ms r&b, thanks lady, appreciate your touch here

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2008-03-14 04:10 AM

Enjoyed the thoughts...James

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

12 posted 2008-03-14 05:51 AM

thanks james

firestorm
Member

since 2008-02-26

Posts 109

13 posted 2008-03-14 07:27 AM

reminds me of a place i visited recently-it was quite enjoyable.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

14 posted 2008-03-14 03:37 PM

thank you ms fire

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