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Arius Miura de Galdri
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0 posted 2008-03-11 10:17 PM


"Second Chances"

The sun has risen in the East
And with it raised my spirits
Again I've given life a chance
With no more need to fear it

A storm of doubt was plaguing me
With fear and thoughts of darkness
My life without you felt too long
When trapped within such starkness

My mourning now is at an end
My future lies before me
I turn to face the rising sun
And let its light restore me

I'll leave my grief behind me now
'Tis not my fate to bear it
I'll live my life with no regrets
And live for you, I swear it

AMdG

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matronmedusa
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1 posted 2008-03-11 10:31 PM


Very nice!
LadyTom
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2 posted 2008-03-11 10:48 PM


Beautiful. love the read.
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2008-03-12 04:33 AM


Nice to read this...James
Artic Wind
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4 posted 2008-03-12 09:47 AM


Wonderfully Written

ARCTIC WIND

Arius Miura de Galdri
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5 posted 2008-03-12 03:27 PM


Thank you all, your comments really inspire me to keep on writing!

AMdG

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6 posted 2008-03-12 04:32 PM


Ready?   Aim.....Fire !

This was very good, please do continue to post.....John

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7 posted 2008-03-13 12:34 PM


Arius Miura de Galdri

I always smile when I see you have posted a poem.  I love this.  Lots.  Really.

A

jwesley
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8 posted 2008-03-13 08:37 PM


much enjoyed the read, my friend...
j.

K-K
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9 posted 2008-03-13 08:42 PM


I really enjoyed this.Good job
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