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PurplePenButterfly
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since 2008-03-06
Posts 65
Canada

0 posted 2008-03-11 02:54 PM



Winter this year has gone on
In my mind and eyes far too long
Cold spells , mild ones,
Well sometimes both in one day
After this weekend's dump
Go away , go away
I don't like walking then slip
immediately on my ***
A few minutes of that embarassment
But I get back upwith class
Skating outdoors no longer my thing
I hate skiing, tobagging
near most winter outdoor stuff
I like it for around Christmas
When it falls ever so gently
The big flakey stuff
I'm not a fan of freezing rain
Nor slush splashed on me and in my face
I do not take kind to those who drive by
on purpose, yes
and commit this act of disgrace
I've had enough of winter , Spring please
venture this way
Go away snow, eh ...

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LadyTom
Member
since 2008-02-29
Posts 353
LA, CA
1 posted 2008-03-11 02:57 PM


Beautiful. Feel your pain in your poem
Enjoyed.

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
2 posted 2008-03-11 05:18 PM


To tell the truth, I LOVE WINTER lol

i really do, but i think i want to see Spring now! lol

ARCTIC WIND

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2008-03-13 03:39 AM


Nice...James
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