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matronmedusa
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since 2008-03-08
Posts 89
Alabama, USA

0 posted 2008-03-10 11:34 PM



When it sings it is voiceless
yet all voices wrapped therein
an echo formed a thought, I thought
and it came from deep within

I had formed the words within my head
but meaning had come and gone
the lyrics now are null and void
without the help of song

I know the difference now;
between myself and "I"
the song is sung in silence
the lyrics are inside

I in every voice
and every voice in me
for I am the song of life
and silence lets it be

© Copyright 2008 Melissa Acevedo - All Rights Reserved
Talyn
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since 2008-03-09
Posts 47
North Carolina, USA
1 posted 2008-03-10 11:39 PM


Very nice finish,
Thank you for sharing

Talyn

"Gang aft a-gley,
an lea'e us nought but grief an' pain,
for promised joy"
--Robert Burn

effjayel
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since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity
2 posted 2008-03-11 01:44 PM


Nice, I find myself looking for your posts & always enjoy them.....
Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
3 posted 2008-03-11 05:10 PM


Nice write!

ARCTIC WIND

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
4 posted 2008-03-12 08:56 AM


I am also a seeker of your poems.
                            Ida

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